By: Marilyn L. Davis
Alliteration Gets Their Attention
“Alliteration is a device that many writers employ to create a treasure trove of tried-and-true, bread-and-butter, bigger-and-better, bright-eyed and bushy-tailed, do-or-die, footloose-and-fancy-free, larger-than-life, cream-of-the-crop titles.” Jim Fisher quoting Edwin Newman: The Writer’s Quotebook: 500 Authors on Creativity, Craft, and the Writing Life. Rutgers Univ. Press, 2006)
Titillating Titles Trap the Readers
Alliteration, derived from Latin’s “Latira” means “letters of the alphabet.” It is a writing style in which several words have the same first consonant sound or occur close together in a series.
Titles are your first opportunity to capture your reader’s attention, and using alliteration in your title is an excellent way to add interest. Even the best writers can produce a killer end sentence; however, if the title does not capture the reader, the article will not get read. Still, titles pose a challenge; some writers have a title in mind and then create the article, and others wait until they finish their post to determine if the title reflects the contents. Either way, a title is the first opportunity for getting readers initially engaged and interested.
Using alliteration is a quick way to engage your readers, meaning that they actually might make it to the end of your article. Toby Fulwiler and Alan R. Hayakawa, list the following ways to hone in on your title.
- Use one strong short phrase from your article
- Present a question that your article answers
- State the answer to the problem that your essay will explore
- Use a clear or catchy image from your article
- Use a famous quotation
- Write a one-word title (or a two-word title, a three-word-title, and so on)
- Begin your title with the word On
- Begin your title with a gerund (-ing word)
Famous, Favorite, and Finely-tuned Titles
Think it’s only desperate or amateur writers who use literary devices? No, we’ve all read or studied many authors who have effectively used alliteration in their titles. Goodreads gives us the top 100 titles, but here are some examples.
- Angela’s Ashes
- East of Eden
- Gone Girl
- Love’s Labors Lost
- Of Mice and Men
- Pride and Prejudice
- Sense and Sensibility
- The Great Gatsby
- The Wind in the Willows
- Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy
Alliteration is the Feel of the Words
Alliteration is about the feel of the words as it is the repetition of a specific letter. JK Rowling uses alliteration in character names as well as anyone. Who can forget:
- Helga Hufflepuff
- Rowena Ravenclaw
- Godric Gryffindor
- Salazar Slytherin
“Women and kids were in the carts crouched with mattresses, mirrors, sewing machines, bundles.”
“Then, starting home, he walked toward the trees and under them, leaving behind him the big sky, the whisper of wind voices in the wind-bent wheat.”
“So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.”
Laundry List of Awesome Alliterations
Now that you know that alliteration isn’t always cheesy, sleazy, and second-rate, check out a site dedicated to alliteration. It might just be the prompt you need to include alliteration in your article. Each writer finds their voice, or their particular style of writing emerges with each piece they write. Your perspective may be expository, descriptive, persuasive, or narrative essay. Become familiar with these four styles as they will help you develop your writing talents; however, all four types or categories can use alliteration.
Challenge: What Will You Write?
Taking a stab, here’s my offering. If you comment, make it alliterative; thanks.
Bio: Marilyn L. Davis
Marilyn is the Editor-in-chief at Two Drops of Ink, an award-winning literary blog where she encourages collaborative writing. The site’s writers are poets, problem-solvers for writers and bloggers, essayists, and represent countries, viewpoints, and opinions worldwide.
She is also the author of Therapeutic Integrated Educational Recovery System and editor-in-chief at her recovery blog, fromaddict2advocate.com.
She recently published her memoir, Finding North: A Journey from Addict to Advocate.
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